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One, two,
Sweet taboo

Three, four,
Never before

Five, six,
Kiss on  the lips

Seven, eight,
Long to wait

Nine, ten,
Fleshes blend

Eleven, twelve,
By themselves

Thirteen, fourteen,
Long to be seen

Fifteen, sixteen,
Minds unclean

Seventeen, eighteen,
Love has been

Nineteen, twenty,
Heart is empty.
©2008-2009 ~PepperPeck
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Something silly.
Thinking about Becky, her nusery-rhymes poems and her way to express love and this dreadful thing popped out.
Aye, me...
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Haha. Tis wickedly amusing! Loved the way it progresses thro the ages with naughty rhymes. It started my day with a grin - thank you. :rose:

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Those who are good at liberating people, are also good at enslaving them. Plato.
It isn't dreadful! It made me laugh! =]] Especially when you said you were thinking about me!
You made it flow really well, and it was a pretty tale! ^^
Welcome ^^ Extra-supah happy I could put a smile on your face !

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There are things known, and things unknown, and in between them are the doors.
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D

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Those who are good at liberating people, are also good at enslaving them. Plato.
*is agreeing with all comments above*

It's amazing!!! :D Much better than the original nursery rhyme you took this from!! ;)

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"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

No Regrets...
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Did I take it from any other nursery rhyme I don't know of...?

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There are things known, and things unknown, and in between them are the doors.
Kinda like the one that goes "One two buckle my shoe" ^^ But yours is better!

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"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

No Regrets...
Ooooh, that one ! ^^ Thanks !

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There are things known, and things unknown, and in between them are the doors.
^^ You're welcome!

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"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

No Regrets...

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